Cyndy Mobley
XXX North Second Avenue
XXXXXXXXX, CA XXXXX
Wieser & Wieser
XXX XXXXXXXXXXXXX
New York, NY XXXXX
13 May 1995
Dear Mr. Wieser:
Marc Iverson suggested I contact you. Marc and I are in the same Naval Reserve unit and he just finished reading a manuscript I’ve had in the works for a few years. He gave me the “full Cleveland” on a previous draft and he says it’s now ready to see the light of day.
When the Russians activate still-functioning WWII mine fields around key Mediterranean choke points, the Commanding Officer of Mobile Inshore Undersea Warfare Unit 106, Lieutenant Commander Jerusha Bailey, must fight through a web of deception and betrayal in order to reach the one man who can prevent a war – the Russian submarine commander now stalking her ship. Rites of War (95,000 words)is the story of a National Security Agency analyst thrust into the center a conflict at sea and the choices she must make and the promises she must break in order to prevent World War III.
I enlisted in the Navy when I was 18. I’m currently the ASW officer in a Naval Reserve unit that provides expert wargaming for battle force commanders. When not with my reserve unit, I’m practicing law in San Diego.
Can I shoot Rites of War over to you? I’m enclosing an SASE or you can reach me at ***-***-****.
Thanks so much for your time!
Sincerely,
Cynthia Mobley